This song is just beautiful as it is. Turning it into a rock song would sound awkward. BTW, awesome job!
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Hey, not much to say. Just thought I'd upload something of mine before I leave for college. (Literally in a couple hours). But, good news! I finally got Audacity to work on my laptop despite Microsoft being stupid, thanks to my new Behringer USB Audio device I can now record and hear myself, as well as jam out to songs through headphones. Can't disturb the roommate now...
This is a standard jam of mine on the piano, it's going to eventually be a metal song, I've kinda jammed it out some but I have to structure everything, and maybe now I can jam it out.... seriously nothing much more to say about it. Just rate and comment plz!
METALkiDofEArTH08 responds:
Thanks! Yeah at this point, it won't be a rock song. Haha. It'll be a standalone, although a polished version may come someday.
wow.
Nice piano skills dude!
METALkiDofEArTH08 responds:
Thank ya! I really really really want to redo this... er, re-record. But... nobody wants me to metal it up. Sooooo I'll just have to figure something out!!! =P
Whatever you do,
Don't change this. Trust us, if you make this any better it will come full circle and be crap. You have real talent with the piano, keep at it.
Pretty Cool! :D
This song kind of tell a sad story.
I agree with the review below; it sounds much better like this. A metal song to me would sound a little odd and unnerving.
Otherwise; a very good song!
METALkiDofEArTH08 responds:
Wow almost a year since I uploaded, and thanks for the response. You know... I think I will take your advice. I think I'm coming back to my piano roots... which is a good thing.
Piano on steroids.
Very powerful piano you got there buddy. I really like the lining of your notes, and the idea you were approaching head on. Please, I beg of you to not kill this piece with a rock song. You doing that is like how babies are so pure and uncorrupted by life's breathing ass of despair, then they want to change what they don't need to change throughout their evolving years.. Because of people can't stop ridiculing the ever imperfected world we have. They can't simply accept the ugly things, the things they dislike as for themselves, so they contradict others, and make them plea for mercy in their mind's agendas..
So, that being said. Great song, DONT FUCKING ALTERNATE IT. 5/5 10/10
- Empyreal Vis-
METALkiDofEArTH08 responds:
I don't have true lyrics to this yet, but I think you just inspired me to write some, and finish this piece.
It's hard though because... I gotta figure out what to do with this and NOT screw it over.
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