Not good

I am a music artist myself, (i havent submitted anything yet though) and I am not good at techno music at all, it was the same the WHOLE way through! You need at least 2 more sections, and maybe some more parts, there were only 3 i believe.
It was good, for about 20 seconds when i thought that there should be more sections.

heard better

I've heard a lot better techno, but keep it making stuff and you should get a lot better-mrStrike