You Keepin It Real

I really hope that you are the future of hip-hop, I'd much rather hear a well put together track like this than that radio bullshit we have now. The flow in the third voice is decent, but the rythm and vocals could use a little work. And the music is perfect 10 outa 10.

Hope this music takes you somewhere, its what the music industry needs.
Also, it would be cool if you could message me a download link to a demo/mixtape/album, or tell me when some new shit comes out.

Illmatic

This is the Illest I've ever heard in newgrounds.

interesting, for sure

Pretty sweet idea man.

Reminds me a bit of Jurassic 5 meets Weird Al.
Not mixed well, though, and I'm not sure the melody always fit in with the mood of the song. The vocals were weak but show promise, I like the metaphors/similies.

shows promise, though; I think you've definitely got talent

Semi-Sick & Simple

First verse was the sickest. Good opener.
The chorus is beasty as hell. I like the swag+catchiness+fun.
Good variation, lots of similies.
Lacked depth though.

The second verse seemed a bit rushed and more gritty.
It was true versing, but the metaphors weren't well delivered.
I loved the content though. This dude is a close, very close second.

Third verse, the voice isn't great. His flow is pretty on cue, but the content isn't as great. The metaphors aren't very well developed. They aren't easy to relate to.

Fourth verse was just dissing some random person and bragging a lot, not much to respect there.

Production was great. I enjoyed the voice quality.
The beat is also a good atmosphere for the verses.

Good Luck Guys.
I 5'd you and gave you an eight.

Keep your head up and try to improve.
It only gets better from here. :]

-Phade
NewEra

great

Nice beat and great rap man. I really enjoyed this. Keep it up and definitely keep me posted on future releases.
peace.