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Uploaded
Jan 17, 2010 | 5:27 PM EST
File Info
Song
4.4 MB
3 min 53 sec
Score
4.18 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 4.18 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
1,311 Plays | 47 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Olskool
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Author Comments

Just try'na bring it back, and rid you fake fucks from society.
Respect to Haywire http://haywirehaywire . newgrounds.com/
Respect to Fayde http://poyzenjam . newgrounds.com/

Snap snap my fingers to the beat.
Respect to Haywire and Fayde, this is sweet.
Just tryin to express to the people by the streets
'Cause the rest don't get the troubles we can speak.

Just trying to reach out to the mother fuckin' world.
But I can't unless the topics bout money or the girls.
So, good thing the beats smooth like the surface of a pearl
'Cause bad thoughts swirl, through my mind.
Everywhere, Pure; cannot find.
Everyone, Kind; cannot bind.
Like Carbons in a Dim-
ond. To the point where I'm stunned,
That in this game you are shunned
If your voice ain't darkened
By the people who can fund it,
Who just run it all.
They talkin about guns,
But laughing when a soldier falls.
And no, I'm not saying that I know it all.
But I understand English, so don't fuckin' make me haaaaaaalt.

What happened to the poetry? HUH!?
What happened? Hope you all agree.
People used music to set themselves free.
Now it's trapping slaves to pay their monthly fees.
Just goes towards their liquor and parties.
"Just goes towards the liquor and the parties"
"Just goes towards the liquor and the parties"
"Just goes towards the liquor and the parties"
I hope those lyrics fucking stop, please.
Until they really shoot me down, they won't stop me.
+1 to the real hip hop, btw it's Cuprous C.

That's what I got.
If I didn't have it, I'd be something that I'm not.
I hope I find a way to take this message to the top,
Though it's bound to isolate until I rot.
Screamin at these bitches,
but do I really have a say?
Maintainin all the stitches,
But never stopping the fray.
Try'na keep it it real, but these people really fake.
Is reality a place that you really want to stay?
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For dem pretty ladies, with the style and the grace.
For dem pretty ladies, leave a smile on your face.
Sorry if I'm busy, but I got to erase.
All these songs leavin' thoughts a nasty taste.
Gingivitis in the tunes, and nobody like to brush their teeth.
Soul can be the dentist, hope it doesn't rot beneath
The gums, the structure. or has it collapsed?
Has a lesson been learned from the time elapsed?

Y'know
difference between a rhyme and a rap.

Y'know
just try'na bring it back to the people.

What ever happened to everyone is an equal?
Getting real sick, but this song needs a sequel
The future is bright yo, I'm just a peephole.
Bringing back hip hop, like I was sent to do so.

EDIT- Vocals louder.

Reviews


GloineFiodhGloineFiodh

Rated 4 / 5 stars

word

good flow, lyrics were ok. sick beat, and you really went with it. I like your flow how you separate your syllables to make the rhyme. Some places it works better then others, but good sound overall. keep writing.


Chista responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah-- I like to think my style is pretty unique, I'm not sure I'm comparable to the other lyricists here, but yea I try to make everything flow with the music above all. This flow isn't my best, for sure. I thought it was alright tho


teddygramteddygram

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good stuff

Flow is right on, and the lyrics are great. I love the positive feel of the track as a whole. Mic qual could be better, but still sounds good!


Chista responds:

Thanks mann, :D yea new mic on the way-- when it gets here, I'm prob gonna be using alot more of your tracks! I've already got some songs written, but I'm waiting for the quality.


BrothaGagetBrothaGaget

Rated 4 / 5 stars

nice

the thing that would help this track would not to fight the beat meaning, work something out with the e.q. hot beat. you might even have to get a new Mic.


Chista responds:

Oh ya, for sure. New set up in a couple weeks. I tried to equalize as best as I could with crap. Have been for a while ;) I can't wait to see what I can do with legit equipment.


LoveKaviLoveKavi

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Mental

Feeling this real ish! First 2 bars killed it already!

Keep it up man!


Chista responds:

Thanks bro! Your review means alot.


KlazikNadiKlazikNadi

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

awesome

Yo great track. I can tell ya spent your time perfecting the lyrics. Great job. I was gonna say the same thing "Amp the vocals a bit" ... lemme know when ya reup and ill download. i could see myself not clicking over this driving down the highway. Props and keep it up!

10/10 otherwise


Chista responds:

Alright, will do. Thanks alot, I appreciate it.