i re- rapped and re submitted this tell me what you think please *im not a good rapper* please dont be harsh

lyrics are

Verse 1:
Sittin in my backyard
With this paper and this pen
Smokin on a bowl in a pipe
With my best friend
Were havin conversations
How fucked this worlds been
All this killin and this fightin
Man we best get to unitin
Its this herb
that'll get us where we wanna go
So sit back
Smoke a bowl
And let the music flow
Let the stress and the hate
Relax out your body
Since your smoking on that dro
you'll love anybody
Cause theres a feeling I get
Everytime I get high
It's the feeling ill have
Right before I die
Cause you see ima smoke weed for the rest of my life
didn't you hear that, that bag of weed is my new wife

Chorus X2:
So sit back
Smoke a bowl
Let them know
Your in control
Of your
Own life
So pick up your pipe
Instead of a gun or knife

Verse 2:
I've never heard of a weed
that'll make you bleed
Or plead for your life
That why all we need is weed
It's the one thing that'll open your eyes
To the skys
And reveal all of the governments lies
All the ties will eventually fall into place
Its smoking that weed
That is your saving grace
All this time and this money
Spent to make it illegal
It's a shame the government takes from its own people
All these taxes and these laws that are put into place
God damn it, it kills me
Its such a fucking waste