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_/I wish you were here\_[edit]

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_/I wish you were here\_[edit] - 4:47

I've been working on this one for awhile, finally got my first song complete with vocals, even though they aren't much, I think they sound good with the song.
And so I sung all the vocals, I tried my best :) haha
And for all those who reviewed this song before, I took all the criticism that was said and put/ changed this song to meet those needs.
If you review my song I will gladly review yours!
And one of my friends actually made the icon for the album!
(I don't make art, I make music :P )

Really hope you enjoy!!!


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You have an awesome voice for trance/techno work.
It fits perfectly. Keep it up. :] I've already downloaded two of yours songs that I've listened to.

ShootingStar responds:

Awesomesauce :) thanks for the downloads + review!!



Bass is a little overpowering in my opinion. Sounds like it is clipping a little too. The vocals adds a nice touch (nice voice =D) but i cant understand what you are saying, and i dont know if you really care cuz it sounds fine as is. Well, im listening again and i can tell what your saying better. I think that when the main lead cuts out for the quieter part, it comes at just the right time, nice. So, i guess my only point is if you mix and master better i think it will triple the awesomenees.

Keep Producing!

ShootingStar responds:

Yes! haha so basically I really don't know what I'm doing when it comes to mastering :P
But time to learn!
Thanks for the review!!


Pretty neat

I liked it overall, I felt that it was a tad overcompressed though. The melodies are very catchy and stick in your head. I also like the way the vocals seem slightly off with that robotic feel. Very well put together :)

ShootingStar responds:

Haha thanks for the review!!


Noice trance

G|ood solid trance u got here :) Good quality too however I reckon the kick could have a litle more power maybe, and maybe you could also fiddle with the vocals cos they sound a little... dull i think :P But apart from that top notch song with some good variation :) Also you got the trance genre very well :)


ShootingStar responds:

Yay haha yeah, I agree with changing around the vocals.. don't really know what to do with them, but I'll mess around.
Thanks for the review!


Not bad at all.

Hey, I like the overall sound of this song - not bad. I will agree, though, that the sidechaining is quite tough to listen to, throughout. Also, your voice is mixed too far behind the mix to really contribute. It'd be great if you mixed it more in the foreground, since it really could contribute to the song, as a whole.

The drums seem a bit too repetitive. Change them up more often, since they tire the ears, as they are.

I love the square wave as much as anyone else, but it seems to clash with the higher quality sounds you've got going, overall. It's not a bad sound, but it doesn't seem right for this mix. Personally, I'd change the sample, but it doesn't detract too much from it, overall.

I really enjoy some of the effects you use on the mastering, and the soundscape is great. The singing is spot on, for the genre, so let's hear some more updates :)

ShootingStar responds:

Oh man - don't know how to respond to that - but really thanks for all the criticism I will definitely look into taking a look at everything you said and posting a new one! Man, now I can't wait to get working on this again! Haha
thanks sooo much!!


Credits & Info


4.58 / 5.00

Jan 5, 2010
5:42 PM EST
File Info
7.7 MB
4 min 47 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.