First try?

nicew first try but compared to other here on NG it nothin keep trying practice

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This song is a mixed bag.

While it barely sounds like the song it is remixing, it is nice and unique in its own way. The end ruins it though.

Keep working on this though,

god plz help him

welll all the song is wrong you not in the tempo and the entire song is a bunch of crap.....arkkk...plz do me a favor and do not put another song like that in newgrounds and plz try to work on tempo and to put the good note at good place