Second half is very good
The first 32 seconds were such a snooze that I almost rated you 2 and left. However, it really sounds good after that point. It's surprising; you gave NO indication of the quality of the whole song and I'm sure that some people will zero-bomb you without getting that far in the song.
My only other problem is that it's much too short (less than a minute because the first 32 seconds don't count) and the ending is totally abrupt.