i go to calisle marching band in pa and i love band (baritones rock) thanks for the music to listin to
Sounds awfully... adobed.
You need a stedier drum rhythm and that bass drum has a terrible reverb.
Also, ORCHESTRA HIT = TEH SUX.
Dont use orchestra hit. ever. its so cliché, its the definition of cheese. AND GET A MELODY. and a chord progression. and a bass line. Then it could be good.