too much

I dont know if its the levels or what, but something about it makes it hard to listen to.
You have an alright piano loop and the timing works, but i would add some variation in the drums and bass.

well))

it sounds really great but it sounds incomplete)) you just need to fix the whole composition and interaction of sounds... bass is surely eating too much around ~2:00

dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sounds good................but im pretty sure you stole the piano part from the cure and just maybe changed one or two notes at the end of the loop, i would try to create a more original sounding piano part and im saying you did this on purpose either it could have been subconciously, i know ive done a bit of that myself.

well well

pretty darn good. for the most part i like although ive heard it before so its not doesnt have that first time listening b-slap in the face. although i will say you will most likey wanna get a different kick at the more rhythmatic parts of the kick cuz it sounds drowny and cheesy(the sound not the rhythm) easy fix with a different layering and the symbals also seems the same so if you can get a low crash sound and have it kinda add that short but sweet symbal ringing it would sound super awesome! colab? :P

damn sweet

pretty damn awesome but i noticed that the drum kick was overpowering and turned down some of the other insturments,other than than that this is indeed bitchin!!