Fantastic guitars

Well this song had some big ups and downs, like in my opinion, that little instrument we hear at the very beginning, was a big down in my opinion, it did not go at all with the jazzy, funky, rock feeling of the song. But on the contrairy, the guitar we hear at 0:52, was... oh my god... pure awesomeness... it was SO good, but what was too bad about it was the fact that you only put it twice into this song. If you would have made a song with that guitar as the main melody during the entier song, that would be such a great song... A godly song... You must do that. But about that guitar, what was really too bad was that torwards 2:00, the guitar really sucked compared to the part at 0:52.
What I would do, would be to get rid of the funk parts and fill them with guitars, unless you make the funk parts better, maybe a little catchy, something like that... Anyways keep making those guitars that good, because they're kick-ass.
New York, 1976
Two friends are fond of drinking, smoking, girls, and cars... Especially fast cars, and their habbit is to drive really fast and attract attention, even if it's police attention. They take out their old, green, beat up 1970 pontiac GTO, and take it down to the streets, driving it really fast, and getting attention everywhere. One late afternoon, they get drunk and drive it fast, again. (0:52) Except this time, a cop caught sight of them, and engaged a high speed pursuit, which ended in the pontiac hitting a parked car, and flipping over. The two buddies leave the car unharmed, they look at each other in a stupid look. They are sentenced to prison 10 years for dangerous driving.
(3:07) 1986,
They finally come out of jail, with long hair and big beards. They seem to take life slowly again, but fast enough, it all starts over again, the drinking, the girls, and the driving... it all ends up by coming back.
Hope you enjoyed it my friend,

GX3