whale.........
Its not bad. I like it, even though it is pretty repetitive. Oh well. If thats your style, go for it. ^_^
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**EDIT** I took SethKorn's review into consideration and made the kick "harder".
I also tried to make it clearer by upping the quality. I don't think it did much though.
**EDIT**
O hai.
I put a decent amount of effort into this one, much more than my last one (my last one sucks).
I decided to try a faster tempo with this one. This was originally going to be 140 BPM but I decided to try it at 200 BPM and it sounds muuuch better.
Has two piano melodies!!! My first time (I think) using piano!
Vote and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE review! Constructive criticism is always welcome.
I didn't know what genre to put this in so don't reem me out.
fucking666killelmo responds:
I'm glad you like it man. Thanks for the 9!
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I really liked the beat except I have a few sugestions for better future songs.
The song was really repetitive and didn't get good until 3 minutes in. I like your piano for the first half of the song, but I feel you overused the same tune way a bit too much. Also as your piano is playing, try having the other beats change much more frequently. Or try combining tunes together instead of using a loop behind the piano.
fucking666killelmo responds:
Yeah...it is kinda repetitive.....
Thanks for the suggestions man. I'll try to use them in future songs!
Thanks for da 8.
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I always love your style, its kinda hard to describe. :D
I could tell that you spent alot mroe time with this one, it just seemed not as rushed as some of your others.
The piano melody was catchy, i found myself humming with it.
The piano was from sytrus, amirite???
Now its my turn to say... i dont like the kick. haha. It needs to be a little "harder" for such a fast tempo.
The melodies seemed kinda slow for a 200 BPM, i think thats cool, pretty unusual.
Keep up the work, fuckin elmo, You have no idea how much you've improved since the first time i herd your music. :D
fucking666killelmo responds:
Heeey! I can't really describe my style either...it's like a combo of techno, trance, dance...I think?
Yeah, I actually spent about 9 hours on this :O Whilst on my other songs I spent from about an hour and a half to 3 hours.
It took me a while to think up those melodies. I probably spent about a good hour on each of them.
You're right about the kick. I'll try making it "harder" :D
Yes the piano IS from Nexus :D It's the Ballad Grand Piano preset.
I'm glad you like my music man! I appreciate hearing that I've improved, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :D
Thanks for the 10!!
Nice.
A little to long to get into the song, but it's good! keep it up.
fucking666killelmo responds:
Glad you liked it man! Thanks for the ten!
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