You got the flow
But you just gotta turn it up a little more mah dude. I'm thinking the verses need to be turned up a notch, and the singing might need to be double layered (only in the middle part tho). That or the bass might be a tad too loud. I dunno, somethings just drowning your vocals out sometimes. But keep doing what you do! I'm gonna go checkout your other stuff now-- brb.