lyrics and review

NOTE TO REVIEWERS/EDITORS: NOTHING IN THIS SUBMISSION IS INTENDED TO OFFEND ANYONE OR THE ARTIST OF THIS PIECE, I MERELY OFFERED MY FREEDOM OF SPEECH LYRICS THAT COULD GO WITH THE SONG, APOLOGIES TO ANYONE IF I BROKE ANY RULES OR OFFENDED ANYONE PLEASE DON'T DELETE MY ACCOUNT.

:09 everybody in the place stand up! (echo fadeout stand up till "productions" comes in)
:23 you get up you get down
you get geeked you come round
like faggot mother fucker got yo ass underground
(like a pimp) [echoed]
now i'm talkin to the crowd
(like a pimp) [echoed]
now ya betta bow down
go straight to the streets
all you posers go home
if you thought you ran the game by now ya you
know you on yo own (on yo own)
now i'm jackin ya i'm jackin ya
now i'm crackin ya i'm crackin ya
(will send the rest later)- if you like i'll make a sample and send it to u via email, if not, its all good-

love the beat- i think its really good cuz it sounds professional- love the synths- reminds me of lil jon and my motif6 haha. what do you use? i like the whole thing in general and think you could go very far.

-DJOXY-