Nice bit of work!
It just seems like the melody overpowers every other instrument and beat whenever it comes on. Maybe consider weakening one or the other, but that's all I've got to say for this. Very mystical little song!
If you didn't read the Response I gave to Megapower, I'll say it again: It's to represent the Zone of War when a soldier is Back-To-The _wall against people he can barely uphold against( The Base of the B Sections, and the Thumping Bass.), and everything around his positions are dying every second. ( The Bells, Snaps and Pops, As well as Breakdown Snare Solos. )
But I thank you for the Criticizing.
This one has a nice mellow vibe to it, good work.
I hope to hear more from you in the future!
Well, It came about while I was playing a round of Combat Arms on the Overdose Map for Showdown, And I couldn't get it out of my head, so I came off and started working on it.
The tone of it was supposed to be the mood of a Soldier who's on Edge of Death, And eveything around him's coming from every end.
That's why I said I may or may not be good. I guess it is. .-.;
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.