wow, no votes
well i think the intro was very well done, and had a nice tone and timbre to it, although it picked up a little slow, and not much at all.
i liked the beepmap or sound generator you had, but it gets a little distracting, lower the volume after he forst 15-30 sec. i don't know if this is techno, but it still sounded nice, although it was mostly beat.
that guitar riff oesn't sound too good when you just put it in there, add some transitions if you want it in there, i think you can find a better sample for that.
not much momentum, but i could see this being used for a menu song for a dark techno-ey kind of song.