From One Media Arts Student To Another....
This theme would work better for a Super Sci-Fi Race Game as a pose to Nintendo Mario Kart or Reality-Based Racing Game that often features either Rock'nRoll or Cheap 8-bit cartoon tunes. Plus your song has too much varience, not enough excitement, and is too long! Most songs for racing go as 30 seconds of intro, 1 Minute of high-action, 30 seconds of middle "story/love theme", then 1 minute mix of High-action and Story that eventually "Melts" at the end so it can easly be looped into the intro for propper looping!
Hope that helps!
Yey! Good feedback! :D It's long, because it's a bunch of different levels all mashed into one song, hurhur. But I see what you're getting at. /learn learn. Thank you muchly.
Music geeks unite! >:D <3