So much better than the most of your music...

But I still want you to either make an actual track yourself(with your keyboard or using virtual instruments). Oh and your ending was very abrupt. I advise that you add some reverb or something onto that last part where just that harmonica loop is playing.

On the good side though I beieve it was well organized, but i think i must give partial credit to Erik for that. And speaking of erik, GOOD JOB on the drums erik. Some pretty crafty stuff you got going.

Overall a good sound. Oh by the way, I am about to post a song called "Kingdom in the Sky" that you should probably check out. It'll probably be on here by the time you read this message.

See ya.

I speak on behalf of everyone who isn't a loser =)

this is exceptionally good... but new grounds is full of what i like to call "heavy heads"... people who only like the hard rave techno stuff... it's good to know that there are other real musicians on new grounds, haha. i would love to work with you sometime =) if you ever want a *real* guitar or saxophone, piano or orchestra track, feel free to ask, please do, i'll record you one in a heartbeat =)

and i'm pretty sure the reason you don't get many reviews is because of all the heavy head losers who just ignore these kinds of music or rate them 1/5 because they don't like the genera =)