Wow, sweet man!
Okay, this was pretty excellent. BUT... at like 00:50, I was expecting (and praying) that like this crazy beat would drop and it would be EPIC. But it didn't and honestly, I was a little let down (lol). Also, there is kind of this strange like... Phasing Wah sound especially prominent in the beginning that is offbeat and kind of out of place. One more thing: I would love to hear the deep bass come out a lot more at 00:54-1:12, that would make my day.
But overall, this was pretty damn awesome. I liked it a lot, and am considering downloading this because it's one of the few tracks on NG that I can honestly say I enjoyed thoroughly. Maybe you could refine this even more and try OCRemix. They probably won't accept because they are prudes and only accept the most insane-quality mixes.
GJ and keep on it!