Remake this
You have to re-work this, the kick is not kicking that hard because all of the effects and such are overpowering the song, I am guessing you are over compressing the song like hell because that every sound plays loud then soft, over and over again. I like the remix as of structure of sounds, but what I would do is to re-mix/mix this and make it better because right now its just a huge mess of sounds.
Better luck next time,
5/10 - 2/5
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