interesting

very unique indeed, very original. I like the airyness of the melody and all that reverb in this song, because it gives you that long ago type of feeling. I like how it is a story also.
Try to bring out the voice abit more too, because the music sort of drowned it away.

I like the song from the 1:30-2:00 mark, so if you could pu more of that inside there then that would be very nice. Becaus it got kinda repetitive at the end.