O.o me confused?

okay i guess not all that too great, get a beat into there and maybe add a few other things. Also turn down that strange bass and add something else. And i say some of the sounds sound metal like. other then that this song would then be better. 4 for origanillty and 6 for strangeness and incompleteness.

Big fault

The melody does not play much role in techno such as the beat and the bass.

There is no beat for someone to bounce to.
and the beginning is ...Random.

-________- eh

o_O?? uh