All it needs is a low end, and a bit more dynamics. I would also try this on an acoustic I think it would sound way better.
You know what?......
Send me the MP3 if you want, and I can put some stuff in there, Let's COLLAB....
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To explain why this is so bland is, when I came up with it I wanted to record as fast as possible, so I made a quick drum beat as a metronome and recorded, and said 'what the hell' and just put it up for input (since it's really the only thing I have at the moment with me on guitar). I've been wanting to remake it... well pretty much since I recorded it, but haven't gotten around to it.
Tell you what, I'll look into re-recording, adding some stuff, send it to you, and we can further brainstorm on that?
Thanks for the review, and the offered assistance! Nice to know people will actually help instead of just providing sometimes-empty words.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.