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E10-TechShock

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First real song! YES!
Kinda cut it short at 1:35 wanted it to be 2 but who cares its done and its awesome!!
Use headphones for best effect (It destroys the quality if its not)

So tell me what you think and what I can do in the future to make it better!!
E10

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behemothfan

2009-10-26 18:36:08

A bit better!

I liked this more than the first one. Just longer with more stuff. Overall, good. I hope chompie likes it.

E10 responds:

Thanks! chompie did not like it :p I don't care its my second song.

butt-munch46

2009-10-19 23:08:50

its ok

its ok, i mean its not repetitiv or any thing but it just boring. nice try tho. keep praticing

E10 responds:

Butt-Munch??? LOL!

Maltloaf

2009-10-19 20:38:02

You probably already know this...

The melody/writing's fine, but the samples consistency kills it - the pizz @ ~1 minute in and the drums most notably.

On the headphones comment - if it doesn't sound right on both headphones and speakers then somethings wrong. Most of my work's midi, but even so the rule is to listen to your tracks on at least a couple of sets of gear - you'll notice issues on one that another masks - and keep tweaking it 'til it's right on everything you've got to hand. :)

<-- Is an arse, but means well. :)

E10 responds:

Thanks for all the feedback it helps me get better!