A bit better!
I liked this more than the first one. Just longer with more stuff. Overall, good. I hope chompie likes it.
Thanks! chompie did not like it :p I don't care its my second song.
its ok, i mean its not repetitiv or any thing but it just boring. nice try tho. keep praticing
You probably already know this...
The melody/writing's fine, but the samples consistency kills it - the pizz @ ~1 minute in and the drums most notably.
On the headphones comment - if it doesn't sound right on both headphones and speakers then somethings wrong. Most of my work's midi, but even so the rule is to listen to your tracks on at least a couple of sets of gear - you'll notice issues on one that another masks - and keep tweaking it 'til it's right on everything you've got to hand. :)
<-- Is an arse, but means well. :)
Thanks for all the feedback it helps me get better!