fix up?

you got a massive kick in the beginning. And the bassline is a lot. i say tone it down on the kick and either use a different tone for the bassline or bring it up and octave. You got a very simple beat as well. I say make it more complex. If the beat is more complex then it'll grab more attention. from 1:34 to 1:49. That snare roll. It goes on for to long in my opinion. And it doesnt really progress. There's a small crescendo. But it's not really anything that caught my attention. You have 92 hits i think. If i counted correctly. That's way to many in my opinion. bring it down to half that. and speed up the roll as it progresses. Anywho. good work on your piece. just needs a little fixing up :)

bass...

it would sound better without it