Good bit of work here
The rating a gave you for this song is not just for this song, but for (mostly) everything you've submitted here. Looking through your song descriptions, you don't seem to have much love for your own music, Take pride in what you make and submit, really feel the music and you can create the most amazing music ever.
With just a bit of practice and working on your levels, you could make some great stuff.
As far as this song goes, I like how hardcore it feels, it's nice