percussion is drowned out

I think you should go back to the mix and push the leads back a little bit, as they rob the energy of the drums considerably. Composition wise it sounds pretty good. I would have added another percussion track or two to keep the percussion interesting, like maybe another hi-hat pattern. Regardless, not bad at all chap.

Great sounding track

I love the way that you've got a nice driving beat and melody to start this track off. The way that you bring the counter-melody into it just caps it off nicely.

I think that it ends a little too suddenly and could possibly be called a little short on that scale of things, since you've got quite a bit of variation thrown into such a short piece of music. The high keyboards that you've put in around the minute could do with being the only instruments playing for about 5 seconds, before the beat comes rushing back in to re-assert itself on the track - it would give a much more dominating presence.

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AMAZING!

This is simply amazing. Ican't believe how you get ur songs to blend together so well. This is just simply fantastic..

Intro was great. I especially liked the fact that u introduced new melodies and instruments every couple of patterns. This contributed to making the whole thing even more interesting and enjoyable.

Transition into the main melody was great, with any other transitions throughout being simply fantastic and smooth as ice. Melodies went from one to the other without any skips or hiccups and this got ur score even higher.

Background was brilliant. I can't find anything to complain about the depth of the song. Bass was fantastic and instruments in the background blended in brilliantly with the foreground, making sure they didn't overpower the main melody. Nice work..

The one thing which i didn't like is the outro though. In my opinion you could've done some sort of fade out instead of just cutting it off abruptly like that. Honestly, i thought my speakers had gone dead (its not like they have a lot of life left in them anyway) but then the song started again and i figured out that that was some kind of ending.

Don't take me wrong, this is a fantastic piece of music and u only got a nine because of the outro and if u fixed that my ten is yours ...

Darklight17
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Generic sounds, but good song

The intro doesn't sound that good. Much too generic sounds that you used there. So I was positively surprised when the song went on what you created with those generic sounds.

You have some very nice melodies in here and the background beat is nice as well. Also, the build up of the song is done in a very good way. It starts off with only the drum beat, then slowly more and more things are added until the "full" song can be heard. Too bad that the song ends so abrupt. At first I thought the song had stopped playing for some strange reasong, but then I heard the intro again... so yeah, the song should be a bit longer and you have to work on the outro.
Maybe taking away the instruments slowly (kind of an "reversed intro") could work here.

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By far one of my favorite techno songs that I've heard on this site. One of the genres that I really don't like at all because of it's many generic sounds and since half of the techno songs that you hear on this site just sound like each other.

This though sounded very professional and was just one of those songs that I can actually see myself dancing to. Since I'm currently sick and bed ridden though (no I don't think it's H1N1) I had to bop my head to the song instead of actually dancing to it.

Very good song all around. Great job.

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