I have an idea

To distinguish yourself from other techno composers, you should compose a ballad. Everyone makes songs like these, but hardly anyone makes good slow songs.

I promise you'll thank me one day LOL :)

Improvements

I can hear theme for sure. The intro is just to sudden for a trance song a think. If Gravey mastered this, then give him this hint: take off the limiter in the master channel. It destroys the sound so much, or if it's not a limiter, then it's soundgoodizer (which is worse). The piano was good but was random at places.

The chords progression was nice, but i can felt that the intro lasted all song. Nothing really happend, no climax, and climax's are very important in trance songs ;P. The only thing that was close to a climax was the lead in the outro.

Still some of the best trance i've heard from you, and i'll wish you good luck in your further tranceprojects ^_^

Helth
5/5

Keep it up! Don't be afraid to make a trance song long - they are normally 8 min. If you want - i can finnish it to show what i mean.

Nvm, nice song, enjoyed it.