You guys have a great idea. It sounds like it could be a good piece. The dynamics were there, just the playing wasn't there for me to really enjoy it.
(Just a piece of advice, get a chromatic tuner.)
.... OH... and use it.
I think things will improve ten fold if you do that as far as your overall sound.
Just advice don't be mad for 5/10.
Take care and keep at it!!
call it newgrounds rock or something
definately better than "slow song"