not bad man
you have a pretty good song here, but its missing out on a lot of classic drum n bass elements. It sounds like your drums are taking a very generic back seat to the rest of your sounds. You can get away with that in other genres but in drum n bass you gotta make drums your focal point (wow so much wisdom in that sentence.... im sure you knew that but its too much to delete now so ill just go on...) Also your song sounds a bit too distorted. I mean it sounds pretty cool but i feel like you lose a bit here and there from not focusing more on the beat.
overall though its pretty nice, keep working on your stuff man i see potential
-fosterCHILD