Betta.
The new sounds are nice. But- one thing that I noticed was that all the melodies you made were just premade presets. Not the sounds- the notes. I'm guessing that in the whole song you only used 4 notes. Also- you shouldnt use that generic bassline very often- ive seen it 50 billion times- try bein more creative with it. And the beat gets a little repeptitive- you should change it up a little more.
BTW dont take this as an insult, its constructive criticism.
-LR-