I'm sorry man, I just didn't like it that much. It's well put together, but I just don't find it that pleasing. That's just me though, a simple opinion. Compositionally speaking, it's really good.

Well, the first bit anyways. I really liked what you did around 2:15, and it was closed out really well.

Wow..This opinion of people you had..?

I wish to hear more, and what you saw within these people before us. If you'd like, we can talk via PM. You sound like someone I would enjoy speaking to. Please, refrain from being overly offended that I wish to dwell in your past, it's matter of curiosity really. Because, I for one love to compose music, write, draw art. I only have one friend, and had to let go of a few friends in my past. So maybe this relative nature draws me to my question of your perspective? Mhmm.. Now.
As for the song, I really like it. You can feel the fury, and vigor you put into this song. this was from your heart, I am very sure of it. When it comes to music, you can hear the faint echoes of the creator's world within every note. Music is truely a very hard language to read, you can't read it.. You feel it.. It's in your veins, your spirit, it cradles your soul. Carresses your mind's mindfield of doubt, cleans up all mist, and fog. It can alternate any moment of thought in a nanosecond. Music is truely a powerful structure of life. Sadly, I cannot compose music right now. I don't have a music program.. :/ I made my music on this pathetic program yet decent program known as MPC, MarioPaint Composer.
Who knows, maybe I will become another great music artist in the future on Newgrounds when I obtain this program in a million years from now. Lol. Atleast I can write, the essence of disembodied truth is what keeps me going, and fighting for the talent I was given. You should, never ignore a talent. It's like a parent ignoring their child. That slight frame of neglectance, will probably make them do something in the near future, when if you did give them the attention they wanted they wouldn't choose such a bad action to do. See my point? Ignoring your talent is like dismembering your reflection. Inspiration is a predetermined response in life to keep you on your path, being lazy will only hide your tracks, and you eventually get lost, having to figure out where to go. Which actually, you are enclosed by the dust of irrepairable mistakes, then you are free to soon realize that you have to create new beginnings, finding sand covered tracks is like finding a needle in a haystack as big as this world.. So, please continue, and never give up. ^^ I like your music. 5/5 10/10
- Empyreal Vis-

great work

I like your music..it sounds experimental and refreshing to me...keep on doing things like that

love it

I was looking for this kinda tune... mind if I use it in my project?

Deep.

Yet strangely, it seems a tiny bit lacking, but I cant figure out what..
As far as depression goes, Im past the acceptance stage. WEEEE DEPRESSION! *Sleeps for 12 hours* Ok, now, to do something half fun and or productive then go back to sleep. I find dreams a bit more potent during depression.