I like the first part but...
Half way through the song things start to run together.
Maybe if you just used some riffs in some less places and builtup with melodies that complimented eachother.
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A song I made when having a good day and fooling with good beats. If using, ask permission and give credit.
DezDragon responds:
I'm just a beginner at making music, so any comments or critiques I'm open to. Thanks for telling me.
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