Ow...
The beat's got potential, but that guitar work hurts. I don't know if its intentional, but it just does not mesh well. The lines are boring, not interesting at all. Then there's the wailing notes that just hurt instead of please.
I redid this so you can actually hear the melody, because i overmixed the last one. and yes i started from scratch just to show you guys sokmething beautiful. :3
Ow...
The beat's got potential, but that guitar work hurts. I don't know if its intentional, but it just does not mesh well. The lines are boring, not interesting at all. Then there's the wailing notes that just hurt instead of please.
I'll try to make it better next time, sorry D':
No dude
That was not good, it had no melody, I can say, you are trying, and my reviews are hard and my submissions generally are something I put up after being drunk, so I understand, my audio sumissions suck, but I don't think this was good enough.
sorry D: it was old song i wrote awhile ago, and i really liked the meldoy but... yeah. sorreh
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