awesome melody but try to fix up that fuzzy bass or whatever that comes in at 0:14 and goes throughout the song. Because It just spoils the melody Try to replace it with another background sound because this song is kinda calming. Also the kick drum kinda sounds offtone. (don't give the kickdrum a musical tone, just have it as a regular kick. But anyway the melody was really catchy and all. good work man.
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