You have some very nice working sounds in here. I guess the problem I had was with the beat. It didn't sound very together, and I like some fluent percussion. I guess one way to not change it up too much is make it glitchy.
At 00:49 when the violins come in, it just doesn't sound to good on the start of it, it sounds a bit rushed. Well, what you have here overall is pretty decent. :)
Well, it was kinda rushed, I guess. XD I'm sure I could have worked that in there better, but I was pretty bored with the idea and had originally planned to show it to a friend to ask for help, since I wasn't very satisfied, but never got around to it.
The first drumkit was supposed to have that sort of sound, but the second probably could have been much more glitchy. Once again, I was bored with the idea.
Thanks for the review though. It's always nice to hear howI could have improved and keep it in mind for future songs. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.