WOW! It's got a doubletime speed metal style kick.... I LOVE that. Also, I like the synth (or strings), but with that drum beat going, they need to sound dirtyer, less happy, and smuthered in gain and distortion :), and It's very short. Solid 8 & 4/5.
Please check out my new track, people think it's my best one yet (but maybe thats just 'cause I suck :P).
Lol I love the clash of Metal-ish drums and happy synth, and it's not totally finished that's why it's so short, I'll put the full longer version of it up when it's done.
I'll definitely check out your music; thank you for listening! :D