You've improved a lot it seems. Your flow and voice are magnificent on this one.
I'm having a hard time understanding the lyrics, however.
Good nonetheless, great beat choice.
Ah k, I should work on that clarity issue then
Mic sounds good, flow sounds good. beat sounds good i think you have earned yourself a 9 buddy! I can ehar some potential in this even for me to sing to it! Good stuff bro!
Then sing! Be FREE!
Yo man, the mellow/singing flow sound aight. One thing I'd have to critique on is that the clarity of your words sounds a bit muffled. You could amp the vocals, but I thought these lyrics could've been a lot better delivered with a more passionate singer's tone. I give ya major props on the chill flow; its got potential. Deep track bro, this spit is fo real. I dig it.
Ya, obviously, this being one of my first attempts at this style, it didn't come out perfectly clear, but I plan on working on that. Thanks dude
3.62 / 5.00 (+ 0.72)
Yo pretty good job here. 10/10 i cant really think of anything that needs improved. there might be some sort of eqing that needs done, but im not noticing it. keep at it!
Thanks dude. And it's possible, I didn't spend too much time eqing this. Thanks for the review!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.