This is alright. There are a few improvements....

that can be made. For example,
More diverse drumset- You seem to be using the FL8 Stock, try finding some new kits. (Also, Upgrade to 9. Major improvments in the software)
Try springing for a guitar- I know its a bit much, But It could help later on. I'll let you know if I ever find a good, inexpensive guitar.
Use some EQ mastering- It can really improve any song, but you gotta find the right balance.

Overall, yeah. Good. You yourself have made some damn good improvements. The FL SLAYER flows much more now. Also, excellent use of effects.

Not bad at all!

I feel it could use a lil more. I'd love to get my hands on this FLP and change stuff up myself because i can hear things that i feel can be improved upon slightly. The song itself feels a lil empty due to the lack of instrumentals. Its a bit simple but thats not really a really bad thing. Its a fun listen for sure and for what you linked for i could see it as something that could work for the contest. However its a remix and that kinda throws me off. Haha It has to be ORIGINAL for the contest =). All in all good song.

Wyldfyre1

you wantet a rev. you got one :)

Well first I will come with the negative thing (and thatsa "thing" as in only one ;) )
Its a bit to trivial. you know! kind a the same all the way trough--- like when you have heard the first 30 sec you know the rest...

That said, i think the composion is great, the sounds chosen mixes realy good togeter and you can actealy listen to it more then once (and thats great for some thing that dosent change during the play)..

And to be onest with you, i think its great, its not my style of listening... but i actealy enjoied it...
Keep up...

8/10 4/5.

MAMAMAMAMAMAMAMAMMAMAMAMAMIA!

Dude, nice music!
-> Downloading it....

AWESOME SONG Dude! you improved well Treviabot! :P

pretty good

8/10