Catchy and atmospheric!
I really like the instrumental selection and the composition of this piece; it has a Tales of Phantasia-esque feel to it. For a first song, this is actually better than most people's first songs that were done on a computer (or actual instruments for that matter). Truth is, I usually don't review music often, but due to the paltry ammount of reviews this has; I just had to say what I have to say.
What I do like:
-Nice instrument choices
-Something new and original
What I don't like:
-The fact that this song hasn't been used in any flash movies.
Overall: Helbereth, how would you like a ten for this underappreciated gem of a song?