Its good, but with one problem

The music would have been SOOOOO much more enjoyable ithout that girl saying "Mmmm I can't feel no better" (double negative) >_< Well, i liked it. I shud really do something about the score. If u get rid of the girl's voice then I'll consider >:D I also heard a part in this that is strikingly similar to something i heard somewhere else. Great job.