Not bad

Cool ideas. But kinda cliche rave sound and not to much variety in the uh, drums. Good luck on future projects!

I say +6 for effort
-4 for originality (or the lack thereof)

Pretty bare-bones stuff

I don't think the beat changed once in the 2 minutes that this song was going on. Neither did the hands-up bass. Also, the intro was WAY too long for a 2 minute track. The whole thing stopped super abruptly without any real outro at all. It would probably take me all of 30 minutes to replicate this whole track once I found the synths you used. I'll give you a 5 because you at LEAST didn't just use a standard kick-crash beat, and you did take the time to bring in a second riff. Still, this is FAR from a finished track. I would suggest submitting this as a loop that's about 30-45 seconds long.