I can really tell you put a lot of thought and feeling into this man. The phrasing is constant, but does vary in tone, and instrument. The drums seemed kind of rough in there, but I think that was the intended effect, but they seem to kind of over power a lot of the ear candy I was hearing.
pretty darn good bro
I really like it for something that would seem to go no where. If i started out with a melody like that i would have no idea where to go with it, so i give you mad props for that ;) I enjoyed the piano alot, and i wouldl ike to see maybe a faster part to some of the instruments, to make it seem a bit more intense you know? also, i would advise maybe making it a bit less repetative towards the end, but that's just me. it's perfect for relaxing to. great job ;)
First thing to fix. Don't tell the listener what he or she is supposed to imagine. That is the listener's job. I didn't bother reading your long comment so I can give you a unbiased description of what I thought of this song.
Nice thunder and rain fx and a good fade in to start the song. The drums work well in this song. The pads and background instrument does bring a calm oasis feel. I like your tremelo or panning delay effects to some of your instruments.
The concern I have with this song is that the piano isn't playing a intriguing pattern. Its playing like one note with no complex chords or arpeggios. Now I can see simple piano patterns in trance music because of the excessive reverb, but in this oasis type song there needs to be more.
I like how you ended the song. Most of your song is good. I'm looking for the lead part (the piano) to take a bigger role, but other than that you did a good job. As for what I pictured, it was like I was in a beautiful garden with a creek nearby. The drums may have took away some of the tranquilty, but I was always a fan of the dance drum beats. 5/5 and 9/10 review.
Bye for now
Thanks for being honest! And I'll try to add more complexity to the piano in the near future.
I rarely review songs, but this one caught my attention. It's good to hear songs in another genre besides techno, trance, or metal on this site. (although I'm guilty of making a few myself.)
Anyway, this is really nice stuff. Stellar job.
Thank you very much!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.