great song

pretty awesome, not really hardstyle though. hardstyle requires reverse basslines like this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8qgeG ON_zM#t=1m8s

still, great song, though after being thoroughly harangued by ng users i have learned to put hardstyle in dance.

Dude

Wrong genre.
You want the trance.

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So starting off with a filter, maybe, and a volume automation. Very nice start. Like it indeed. I liked your little snare roll, to kinda rev the song up, but I hated the crashes, lol. It still sounds decent though, so no worries.
But it doesn't seem to have much of a variation after you rev it. So what was the point? Like, I understand techno style things are repetitive, trust me I make music too, but I didn't notice a difference. And from the looks of it, it never did change.
Oh my, I do like your outro, though. I liked the bass. Was that there the whole time?
It's not bad, just kinda short and what have you, man.
4/5
Come drop me a review if you'd like.

Danm you did pretty good.....

It's very nice! For a first time your doing awsome. Just in the future, make shure it has that feeling of "Hard and Crazy" before you post it! This song just doesn't quite have that feeling. It's more Happy Hardcore then Hardstyle. 10/10 5/5