Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
oh here is something nice and i love how this starts out very neat, and the quality is pretty good with the sounds and instraments, very good sounds here, now this almost sounds japanese, but anyways almost seems like you could add some vocals to this and it would be that much perfect, now as improving onto this, not too sure its already great and i would leave it as is, anyways great track here make more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
hard to change anything on this as it was perfect.

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What does dor mean?

I am not sure what the title means, but whatever intention this was a good song. What really works is how it has a fairly consistent style with some variety. That's always a good recipe. My only complaint is that I think it goes on a bit too long for something that doesn't really have that much variety. It seems to have a tone of mystery or maybe it's building up to something in the long run. It almost seems like a lullaby.

I guess the mirage comes from the fact that it seems to use the same notes over and over. I wasn't really annoyed by that because the overall style is pretty good. While it has some more chaotic moments, it keeps its general pleasant tone. I do not even know what bended false means, but I bet this song did it. It's a fairly good tune.

Hmm..

Interesting track. ;P But as I got the inside scoop of it, it might be easier to understand what the track is all about.

You're right, you can compare this track with puberty. :D When it first starts off it's a bit awkward. The melody line is quite thin and there isn't that many elements in the mix. As it progresses, new elements are introduced and it kind of evolves into this really awesome, and let's say complete track.

Awesome track. I respect people trying to make some original video game music haha. :D I've been doing that myself for a while now, and it's really fun! You did a great job here!

10/10
5/5