i dont know if begginins supposed to be creepy but i like this...kepp up the good work.i disagree with max though its really good...but even the best can do better so you can to.¤¤¤if u can fig what those symbs are you a xbox nerd...im doing this on xbox..ill pm you if you pm me about it.
the only thing i have to say is shorten the gaps
The gaps build up tension, shortening them is minimizing the tension building up.. I think
not too bad
dosnt sound too bad man.... nice
Feel the gaps
Writing different themes in one composition is really hard, and in this case, there's no work to join each themes, not even a bridge... it sounds like some tests you glued together to make a song.
Its hard, thats why I failed. Im still a rookie.