not bad

really you have an idea here not bad.... really needs work on EQ melody is ok... but your bass over powered your whole song! controle grasshoper! the nobs are there for a reason son! keep it up though you will ge it :P we all start some where

verrrrr nice!

i like it its catchy... BUT its got an overwheming echo at 1:00, and it has to many sounds at once.. for example: right around 1:29 the Sytrus preset "Big Layer" is out of key and dosn't fit nicely. Also the bass is overwheming and sounds choppy.. its quite common but there are ways to fix this. Check popular video websites for tutorials. last thing: if you have too much going on then it sounds like NOISE and its just hard to listen to keep trying and use the mixer FX (they kick ass) i too am using the FL8 demo and its a pain in the ass how you can only export it but whatever, its the music that counts

Decent song, *NOT A TRANCE* and it has potential

luv Shanyz