This is my FIRST song I've made and I'm pretty proud of it. I hope you guys like it. I will make more if I get decent comments and if you guys love it :) Leave a comment about what you like or think I should Improve on. Btw I'm only using a demo so I have to make the whole thing in one sitting. this took about an hour. I'm glad I've finally contributed something to newgrounds.
hmmm...
sorry to be harsh, but I do believe that this song has a lot more potential. There isn't enough percussion and it sounds too light. since it is you're first one, it's not horrible. It's actually really good. Just try to see if you can add more to it. Remember: even the best of work needs improvement, so don't be upset if I'm being too harsh for you're first attempt.
Its a little light
This was an alright remix, kudos to your first one, but it seemed lacking, personally i like a really heavy beat and loud bass, thats just me, but this seemed like it was lacking a backbone, it needed to have more depth to it, just by adding a drum beat or something, other than that it was nice :D
Hmm...
It's a decent sounding remix, but there's just so many things you could do with it. There are some notes that are off, and I'm pretty sure this doesn't fit into the loop category since it seems to have an ending. Other than these flaws, not too bad. Keep trying at it and you might get it to be as good as some of the other remixes on NG.
its the first song ive ever made in any kind of music program. Im kinda proud of it. But thx for the honest oppinion. I know I have a way to go lol also i have to do it all in one sitting since i only used the demo. I cant save my work.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
OPFX 
gabe-1333 
Dj-FranKarol 
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