Awesome!
I REALLY liked the breakbeat stuff, very handsup-ish.
I think the kick and bass (in the main part of the track) could've been a LOT more powerful. Try fooling around with the Multiband Compressor (if you use FLStudio) to get them to "pop" more and take over the track.
Great melody work in this one! Keep it up!
If you have a second, could you review my latest track? That'd be awesome, thanks! :)