huaha

Tune is nice, but it should have some sort of beat.

Pretty Cool...

I liked the beginning a lot. It really helped to create a cool atmosphere.

I like just about everything about it, except for the FL Slayer. That kinda hurt my ears a bit, but you work with what you have at your disposal. I recommend finding a different guitar sample or vst though.

Also, add some percussion. That would really help this little loop out a lot. You need some really mean hits or something in my opinion. Like big grating industrial machine like hits.

Besides all that though, this is pretty cool. The different synths really fit well together, and create a dark and mysterious atmosphere.

4/5 and 7/10 overall. Nice work, but still has some room for improvement.

-Gravey-

Dare I say it?

Woot. :)